Zack Bustersword

by Guest June 6th 2008, 9:20 pm

Name: Bustersword

Appearance: The sword Zack carries on his back is long and a bit wide than most. It also has a unique shape about along with the carvings on it. The hilt is red and gold but it is usually covered in bandages. Under the hilt is black steel with two hole in it. The sword is in good condition since Zack as master hand to hand combat.
The Bustersword can also separate but Zack is not sure on how many pieces.

Abilities: Slash

Attack Power: 75

Dice usage: Attack

Benefits: Offensive and Defensive

History: The Buster Sword was originally the property of Angeal Hewley, Zack's mentor. Angeal used it as little as possible to prevent it from damaging. It was created for him by his adoptive father when he first entered SOLDIER. Zack inherits the Buster Sword from Angeal after being forced to defeat him in his Angeal Penance form. Angeal spoke of the swords as a symbol of his honor. Zack seems to view it more as idealic symbol of the honor of a SOLDIER, though he uses it with significantly greater frequency. Zack issues the broadsword to Cloud after Zack willingly fights for his life to save both Cloud and himself. In doing so, he passes on to his friend his dreams of being a hero and his pride as a member of SOLDIER, telling Cloud that he is the proof that Zack lived.

by **purpleregiment7** June 6th 2008, 11:10 pm

history is not long enough

by Guest June 7th 2008, 9:44 am

The appearance is also shorter than the minimum.

by Guest June 7th 2008, 2:57 pm

Sorry about that, I finish editing it.

by **purpleregiment7** June 7th 2008, 10:09 pm

hiatory still isnt long enough

by Guest June 9th 2008, 10:14 pm

All done, my techniques are on the way .

by **Jisenki** June 10th 2008, 1:37 am

Your sword has no attack power. You should make a simple technique called 'slash' or 'slice' that can attack an enemy. Then you should give it attack points or else your sword will do nothing in battle/

by **Nejisuke** August 1st 2008, 7:16 pm

i assume that you will need a technique there to have an attack power.

by **Kisuke** August 2nd 2008, 10:46 pm

The ability needs to have a more detailed description rather than just the name. I agree that it is pretty self-explanatory what a slash is, but each character is unique and fights in different ways. Explain how Zack slashes and describe the effects of him slashing.