Drake Nightingail [wip]

by Guest April 7th 2010, 10:25 pm

Name:Drake Nightingail
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age:22
Alliance:independent
Homeland:Byron, Illinois, USA
a small town located in the north of the state of Illinois. it's a very forested area, with population in the mid-upper 100's. it's a very boring town, which is why Drake chose to leave his home their, after training with the elements of fire and lighting, and training to fight without a weapon.
appearance:
Drake Nightingail [wip] Evillukeicon-1

Ranking:
independent

personality :
rude and rough, but very protecting of the few friends he has.

Type of warrior:
martial artist and element user.
(idk if i can have two, but it's really a combination of the two... if i can do that

Elemental affinity:
lightning and fire.

History:
(i can't think of anything right now... plz let me work on this for a while and i'll put some thing up. thank you for understanding... that is if you understand that is.)

Theme Song:
through glass by: stone sour.

Abilities:
Fireball: a fiery blast of power.
Thunder kick: an electric orb that is kicked to launch.
(more to come)

by **_[Spitfire]_** April 8th 2010, 5:28 pm

Ok, this is just a warning from me, There is a section on the Creation Zone for Abilities and Techniques. And Sentou Gakuin is not apart of our world, It's a world of it's own so, when you are going to do your RP Sample, make sure the place your character is in is part of the Sentou Gakuin World.

by **Hei** April 8th 2010, 7:45 pm

Ahem. Allow me to give some advice in a more grammatically correct fashion.

Firstly, your information is much too scant. Basically, you want to make a very detailed explanation for each subheading. If you need ideas, check my character.

Secondly, don't have your character's backgrounds in someplace that EXISTS. The Sentou Gakuin universe is one separate from our own, and we must treat it as such.

Next, before you actually start to create your character... check the templates. I can tell that you completely disregarded the template as well as all of the classes that your character can have.

Moving on, you shouldn't have your abilities listed in your character creation. You should have them listed in, you know, the area where you list your abilities.

Lastly, please, PLEASE, try to master the English language. English was not my first language and yet I seem to have a better grasp of it than most of those who have been born in this country. You and Spitfire can have some group studying sessions.

Goliath, out.

by Guest April 10th 2010, 2:55 pm

thank you both for your help, I'll start a new Character Creation page, okay?

by **_[Spitfire]_** April 10th 2010, 11:19 pm

You dont need too, Just keep working on this one. And remove the errors.

by Guest April 12th 2010, 6:23 pm

Name:Drake Nightingail
~Nickname:
Age:21
Gender: male
Breed: Human
Ranking: Wanderer
Warrior
Class: gunner
~Sub-Class: blaster
Elemental
Affinity:fire
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Physical
Description: Height: 5"9', weight: 155.
(can't think of anything else for this part. i will post a picture that my character looks like, if that would be OK.)

Personality: Kinda crazy, and love-ably a moron. Fights to the death for any friend
or friends that need his help.
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History/Background: "for me, family isn't just blood, but instead it's those who spill their blood to help you, or those you'd spill blood to protect." ~myself i think~

Hailing from a separate demonstration, called soukutsu, is a bit of a strange one. his believes about family caused a rift to form between his "blood relatives", who believed him insane, had a falling out that ended with him in a psyche-ward. during his stay in the hospital, his world was attacked by heartless. just as his world was torn a sunder, he was blown away by the forces of darkness,*
RP
Sample:

(still working on it.)

by **Kisuke** April 13th 2010, 12:45 am

As a moderator of this section, I'm here to help whenever assistance is needed. Simply send me a private message or request my help here.

by **_[Spitfire]_** April 13th 2010, 8:22 pm

Drake, if you are going to edit your character, you do not have to put it in a new post. At the top of your topic should be the button: "Edit". Click on Edit and you can edit your character's topic or post.

Just a little Advise from me.

by **_[Spitfire]_** April 14th 2010, 9:28 pm

Drake wrote:
Name:Drake Nightingail
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age:22
Alliance:independent
Homeland:Byron, Illinois, USA
a small town located in the north of the state of Illinois. it's a very forested area, with population in the mid-upper 100's. it's a very boring town, which is why Drake chose to leave his home their, after training with the elements of fire and lighting, and training to fight without a weapon.
appearance:

Ranking:
independent

personality :
rude and rough, but very protecting of the few friends he has.

Type of warrior:
martial artist and element user.
(idk if i can have two, but it's really a combination of the two... if i can do that

Elemental affinity:
lightning and fire.

History:
(i can't think of anything right now... plz let me work on this for a while and i'll put some thing up. thank you for understanding... that is if you understand that is.)

Theme Song:
through glass by: stone sour.

Abilities:
Fireball: a fiery blast of power.
Thunder kick: an electric orb that is kicked to launch.
(more to come)

When you want to edit your post, just look at the top right corner of your topic and you should see " Edit". Then you can edit your Posts.

Just Keep Working
-SpitFire

by **artemishiu** April 14th 2010, 11:17 pm

Spit, what you just did there counts as double posting, DON'T DO IT AGAIN.

by **Dagomis** April 16th 2010, 11:05 pm

Both of you stop commenting. You're beginning to flood the topic. This is not to continue and you two are not to post in this topic again. Clear?! Good. Leave it to the actual mods rather than doing what you two have so blantently done.

EDIT: It was only Spitfire that was flooding and therefore the only one who needs to stop commenting this topic. Though the same statement applies: Leave it to the actual mods!