Henri's Equipment

[artemishiu]

Name: Conflexion Armor
Appearance:
This is a suit of armor that Henri wears under his cloak. It is black in color and is made out of a lightweight and strong metal alloy. This set of armor includes the torso, the arms, the shoulders, the legs, and the neck. It has also been enchanted so that it becomes formfitting and as a result, Henri can still wear it, even in dragon form. It is very useful and Henri has kept it in perfect condition for years. Henri has been using this armor for about the last 5 decades. It still looks quite shiny, though.
Effects: -150 Damage from all elemental techniques that affect Henri. If it is a spellcaster technique, another -100.
History:
This is armor that was made by Henri himself when he was learning various trades on his many journeys across the world. He used his knowledge of the sciences to create the ultimate metal alloy. After
doing that, he designed it to fit his body perfectly. It was just a strong suit of armor at the time. But after a time, Henri decided to upgrade his armor through various enchantments. After the enchantments were made, this armor has become even more important to Henri. He has been using it for the last fifty years. After five decades, it is still in prime condition. This proves how important it is to Henri.
Quantity: 1

Name: Dragonhide Cloak
Appearance:
This cloak is made out of dragonhide. It is pure white in color and covered with scales. It is embedded with magical power and as a result is a useful item for any Spellcaster. It is a big cloak that will reach
to the ankles of even a 7 feet tall man. It is also a very useful item for any person who has an occupation that would cause them to be in danger of being burnt to a crisp. This item has served Henri well for the past fifty years. it still has not failed him. It is also kept very clean and well by Henri.
Effects: -200 damage from Spellcaster techniques that affect Henri and fire technique damage is halved.
History:
Henri traveled across the world after leaving his kingdom. One day, he had to do battle with an evil dragon who was terrorrizing a small village. After defeating the evil ice dragon, he purified the corpse and prayed to the Dragon Gods for forgiveness. Afterwards, he took some of the dragon's hide in order to make a cloak. He realized how much of a sin it was but knowing the magical properties of a dragon's hide, he
had no choice. He has mourned the death of the death of his fellow dragon and has kept this cloak in perfect condition to make up for it. It has served him well for the past fifty years and even now, Henri still asks for forgiveness.
Quantity: 1

Name: Ammunition Bag
Appearance:
This is a pouch that Henri made to hold bullets. It gave him a place to store all the bullets that he made himself. It is light brown, almost tan in color. It is about medium sized with white string hooking it to Henri's armor belt. It is made out of cotton and other natural polymers. It has a a crosshairs symbol on it as a decoration. Henri has been using it for decades. It is still in perfect condition and it also protects the bullets very very well. Henri places protection charms on it regularly to help keep it that way.
Effects: Gunner Weapons of Henri's will deal an extra 100 damage.
History:
This is a pouch that Henri had made to hold bullets. The bullets it holds are handmade bullets created by Henri himself. At first, it was just a normal ammunition pouch. However, as Henri stopped fighting for
a while, he noticed that his pouch wasn't really protecting his bullets and quite a few were bent or damaged. He decided to place a few magical enchantments on the bag so that it would preserve the effectiveness of
his bullets. As a result, all his bullets were kept in top condition and dealt higher damage than usual. Henri has been using this for the past fifty years and he maintains it by placing protection charms on it regularly. He does it about once every month or so.
Quantity: 1

[artemishiu]

Bump, I am finished.

[artemishiu]

Bump

[Kisuke]

First, before I read it and critique it, can you edit your lines so that they stretch out completely across the width. I can't tell how many lines you actually have.

[artemishiu]

I have edited.

[Kisuke]

Name: Conflexion Armor
Appearance:
This is a suit of armor that Henri wears under his cloak. It is black in color and is made out of a lightweight and strong metal alloy. This set of armor includes the torso, the arms, the shoulders, the legs, and the neck. It has also been enchanted so that it becomes formfitting and as a result, Henri can still wear it, even in dragon form. It is very useful and Henri has kept it in perfect condition for years. Henri has been using this armor for about the last 5 decades. It still looks quite shiny, though.
Effects: 10% Resistance towards all elements and 15% from Spellcaster Techniques
History:
This is armor that was made by Henri himself when he was learning various trades on his many journeys across the world. He used his knowledge of the sciences to create the ultimate metal alloy. After
doing that, he designed it to fit his body perfectly. It was just a strong suit of armor at the time. But after a time, Henri decided to upgrade his armor through various enchantments. After the enchantments were made, this armor has become even more important to Henri. He has been using it for the last fifty years. After five decades, it is still in prime condition. This proves how important it is to Henri.
Quantity: 1

Name: Dragonhide Cloak
Appearance:
This cloak is made out of dragonhide. It is pure white in color and covered with scales. It is embedded with magical power and as a result is a useful item for any Spellcaster. It is a big cloak that will reach
to the ankles of even a 7 feet tall man. It is also a very useful item for any person who has an occupation that would cause them to be in danger of being burnt to a crisp. This item has served Henri well for the past fifty years. it still has not failed him. It is also kept very clean and well by Henri.
Effects: 15% resistance to Spellcaster techniques and 50% resistance to fire.
History:
Henri traveled across the world after leaving his kingdom. One day, he had to do battle with an evil dragon who was terrorrizing a small village. After defeating the evil ice dragon, he purified the corpse and prayed to the Dragon Gods for forgiveness. Afterwards, he took some of the dragon's hide in order to make a cloak. He realized how much of a sin it was but knowing the magical properties of a dragon's hide, he
had no choice. He has mourned the death of the death of his fellow dragon and has kept this cloak in perfect condition to make up for it. It has served him well for the past fifty years and even now, Henri still asks for forgiveness.
Quantity: 1

Name: Ammunition Bag
Appearance:
This is a pouch that Henri made to hold bullets. It gave him a place to store all the bullets that he made himself. It is light brown, almost tan in color. It is about medium sized with white string hooking it to Henri's armor belt. It is made out of cotton and other natural polymers. It has a a crosshairs symbol on it as a decoration. Henri has been using it for decades. It is still in perfect condition and it also protects the bullets very very well. Henri places protection charms on it regularly to help keep it that way.
Effects: Gunner Weapons will deal an extra 100 damage.
History:
This is a pouch that Henri had made to hold bullets. The bullets it holds are handmade bullets created by Henri himself. At first, it was just a normal ammunition pouch. However, as Henri stopped fighting for
a while, he noticed that his pouch wasn't really protecting his bullets and quite a few were bent or damaged. He decided to place a few magical enchantments on the bag so that it would preserve the effectiveness of
his bullets. As a result, all his bullets were kept in top condition and dealt higher damage than usual. Henri has been using this for the past fifty years and he maintains it by placing protection charms on it regularly. He does it about once every month or so.
Quantity: 1

They don't really fit the line requirements, but it is close and I can understand your equipment. I see no harm in them although another mod may choose to object. Anyway, I APPPROVE.

[artemishiu]

I edited because I noticed that they were still percentages after mods had asked me to change them. I must've forgot to, anyway, they're up for approval again.

[Kisuke]

It still looks good but I want to point something out for your benefit. You should probably change the effect of your ammunition bag so that it specifies that only the equipped character or you receives the effect of having their Gunner techniques inflict an additional 100. If you don't, someone could make the argument in a battle that the bag affects their character as well....unless that is what you intended.

[artemishiu]

Alright, I changed it.

[Kisuke]

Very well. Approved.

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